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delphipsmith ([personal profile] delphipsmith) wrote2016-02-20 08:34 pm
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Amazon warnings that would actually be useful

The little icons that go with each warning are HILARIOUS. I think my favorite is "excessive use of passive voice" XD

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[identity profile] droxy.livejournal.com 2016-02-21 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
These are funny but I do not know what head hopping is.
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[personal profile] delphipsmith 2016-02-21 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Head hopping is where the author changes POV at random, whenever they feel like it. Like in the middle of a scene which is 90% from Jane's POV, suddenly we slip into John's POV for a paragraph or two. Very distracting and hard to read. Not to be confused with third person omniscient, which is a legit POV where you are in everyone's head all the time.

[identity profile] droxy.livejournal.com 2016-02-21 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah,OK LOL.
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