Amazon warnings that would actually be useful

[delphipsmith]

The little icons that go with each warning are HILARIOUS. I think my favorite is "excessive use of passive voice" XD

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[delphipsmith]

Head hopping is where the author changes POV at random, whenever they feel like it. Like in the middle of a scene which is 90% from Jane's POV, suddenly we slip into John's POV for a paragraph or two. Very distracting and hard to read. Not to be confused with third person omniscient, which is a legit POV where you are in everyone's head all the time.

[droxy.livejournal.com]

Ah,OK LOL.